That was really good! . Where did you get youtr ideas? Have you written any more of it yet?

This is just the very beginning of one I have recently started. I don't usually show anyone till it's finished, but hey! Hope you like it... BTW: Kamren is pronounced (Kam-renn)

The girl was small, petite. Her pale skin was in stark contrast to her jet black hair. She was wearing a long coat, the hood up, hiding her face. He could only see her hair because dark wisps of it floated around her face in the harsh wind. She appeared from nowhere. 'Who are you? And what do you want?' He called.
'I'm from White Fox. I want shelter, there's a storm on the way.'
'Well, What's your name? The girl repeated what she had just said. 'I want your name! No one enters if we don't know them!'
'I can't tell you my name. Or anything other than my clan and age.'
'Which is?'
'I'm thirteen tomorrow.' Great! A child. He couldn't turn away a kid in a storm, but then, she refused to tell him her name- if she was lying about being White Fox, she could be one of them. Which brought up White Fox. If she was a member and didn't survive, they'd blame the Whale's- which would mean problems for both clans in the future.
'I can't let you in if you don't tell us your name... There are children in here. Babies...' There was a pause in which only the wind spoke. Then, very softly she answered.
'Kamren . Kamren Kana.' And then, she collapsed.